https://youtu.be/sEAGa6G0XIg
The most useful feedback I received was on the time requirement. A few people mentioned that my video was too short, so I made sure to lengthen the pitch this time. I also received positive feedback about my confidence, eye contact and gestures, so I tried to replicate those again. I was most surprised by how well everyone took to the idea of my product. Many people stated that they recently struggled with the problem that my product addresses. From this feedback, it seems like my product is very useful and my pitch sold it well.
Hi Julianna,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your elevator pitch! I think this one was much stronger than your last one in the sense that you were able to keep the structure of your original pitch, while adding changes and details that were not included before. I think adding that your description of why studying at home is not an option was a great addition as it eliminates alternatives and strengthens your overall concept.
Hi Julianna,
ReplyDeleteYou have definitely improved from your first elevator assignment. You have perfected the speed along with adding additional information that was not included in the first pitch. It also helped explain the need further by including the option of why many individuals are unable to study at home. Great job on your second post and I am sure that your third post will be even better.
Julianna,
ReplyDeleteLike the others, I have to commend you for improving this already impressive pitch. I, too, felt that your body language was your strong suit in the previous one and I like how you were able to retain that while improving other aspects of your pitch. Like Gianna, I feel that eliminating the alternative of studying at home was a strong move in this pitch. Keep up the great work and if you choose to pursue this, I hope it all works out for you.