Hi Julianna, I really enjoyed watching your pitch. Coincidence that your pitch was about an app that told you whether or not a study area is busy because when I was walking through Turlington today, a student government candidate was trying to convince me to vote for him he would try to implement that same idea. Overall, video was a little short but your ending was great.
I thought that you did a great job with maintaining eye contact, voice inflection, and body language. You also did not use any of the dreaded “ums” that I find really irritating when listening to a speaker. If I hear more than one “um” it throws me off and the only thing that I focus on from that point on is counting how many times they are going to do it. Once again, great job on pitch!
Your idea is such a good one!! I was just at West yesterday and spent over 30 minutes trying to find a good spot to study, it's seriously impossible. I like the fact that we are able to see live counts and cameras on recsport's website, I think doing something like that but for studying is an amazing idea! Your pitch was right to the point and well said, my only critique is to have made it 90 seconds instead of 50 but overall it was really good! Please follow through with your idea!
Hey Julianna, After watching your elevator pitch, I think you did a great job. Your hook was effective in getting the audience's attention and you seemed very confident in your opportunity and the approach. I think these two characteristics are very crucial to having a successful elevator pitch. Additionally, maintaining eye contact is important, and you succeeded with that as well. Overall, great post! I enjoyed listening more about your idea.
Hello Juliana Great job on your pitch! I liked how you got straight to the point because you wanted to catch the listener's attention quickly. This app, although very simple, could help so many college students get started on their studies faster and could therefore lead to better grades. I also liked your hand gestures, it really helped emphasize your idea and strengthen your message.
Hi Juliana, Your elevator pitch was excellent! You seemed enthusiastic and knowledgeable about your app and if I were to put myself in the shoes of an investor, I would definitely consider your product. You seemed confident about the success of your product and I think that is a crucial element in any elevator pitch as you are not only selling your product to someone, but your confidence in the product too.
Hi Julianna, I can really say I was so impressed by your pitch. You were captivating, had great inflection in your voice, and the speed was perfect. I could understand exactly what your pitch was and how you were going to solve your problem. Your hook was relatable. Really great job.
Hey Julianna, Looks like your pitch went really well! This is a great idea and I hope it goes far! On the topic of the pitch itself, you spoke very effectively and used pauses and gestures really well. The "gone are the days" section of your pitch wraps up your solution really well. It shows your confidence in your solution and helps the audience realize the impact of your solution. I'm impressed. Good job.
Hi Julianna, I really enjoyed watching your pitch. Coincidence that your pitch was about an app that told you whether or not a study area is busy because when I was walking through Turlington today, a student government candidate was trying to convince me to vote for him he would try to implement that same idea. Overall, video was a little short but your ending was great.
ReplyDeleteHi Julianna,
ReplyDeleteI thought that you did a great job with maintaining eye contact, voice inflection, and body language. You also did not use any of the dreaded “ums” that I find really irritating when listening to a speaker. If I hear more than one “um” it throws me off and the only thing that I focus on from that point on is counting how many times they are going to do it. Once again, great job on pitch!
Your idea is such a good one!! I was just at West yesterday and spent over 30 minutes trying to find a good spot to study, it's seriously impossible. I like the fact that we are able to see live counts and cameras on recsport's website, I think doing something like that but for studying is an amazing idea! Your pitch was right to the point and well said, my only critique is to have made it 90 seconds instead of 50 but overall it was really good! Please follow through with your idea!
ReplyDeleteHey Julianna,
ReplyDeleteAfter watching your elevator pitch, I think you did a great job. Your hook was effective in getting the audience's attention and you seemed very confident in your opportunity and the approach. I think these two characteristics are very crucial to having a successful elevator pitch. Additionally, maintaining eye contact is important, and you succeeded with that as well. Overall, great post! I enjoyed listening more about your idea.
Hello Juliana
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your pitch! I liked how you got straight to the point because you wanted to catch the listener's attention quickly. This app, although very simple, could help so many college students get started on their studies faster and could therefore lead to better grades. I also liked your hand gestures, it really helped emphasize your idea and strengthen your message.
Hi Juliana,
ReplyDeleteYour elevator pitch was excellent! You seemed enthusiastic and knowledgeable about your app and if I were to put myself in the shoes of an investor, I would definitely consider your product. You seemed confident about the success of your product and I think that is a crucial element in any elevator pitch as you are not only selling your product to someone, but your confidence in the product too.
Hi Julianna,
ReplyDeleteI can really say I was so impressed by your pitch. You were captivating, had great inflection in your voice, and the speed was perfect. I could understand exactly what your pitch was and how you were going to solve your problem. Your hook was relatable. Really great job.
Hey Julianna,
ReplyDeleteLooks like your pitch went really well! This is a great idea and I hope it goes far! On the topic of the pitch itself, you spoke very effectively and used pauses and gestures really well. The "gone are the days" section of your pitch wraps up your solution really well. It shows your confidence in your solution and helps the audience realize the impact of your solution. I'm impressed. Good job.